"Clever Headlines Usually Flop! Are You Being Too Clever For Your Own Good?"

Mar 1
08:27

2005

George Dodge

George Dodge

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Copywriters that try to be clever, humorous, abstract, or usedouble entendre with their headlines and ads will normally findthat they flop and are thus a waste of both time and money. Manyof the Super Bowl ads fall in this category. While they are oftenfunny to watch, most people don't remember what company the adwas promoting.

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Ted Nicholas tells the story of how a book that he had writtenwas not selling very well. He had titled it, "How Not To Drown InA Sea Of Debt." One day he stopped by a bookstore and looked forthe book in the personal finance and self help sections but couldnot find it. So he went to the information counter and asked ifthey carried the book. He was told yes they had it in stock, andit was located in the swimming section!

Ted subsequently changed the title to 'How To Get Out Of Debt'and the book sold well from that point on.

If you are trying to promote something, keep your titles clearand simple. Leave clever and humorous to the entertainers.

Headlines that are too abstract are often unclear to the readerand do not clearly identify to the reader why they should beinterested in the information contained in the follow on copy.

Make your headlines clear. Identify a benefit to the reader as towhy they should read on further into your ad, article, or salesletter. If you do, you will find your desired results willimprove.

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